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Every Single Kind of Hero [userpic]
Critique/redlines please?
by Every Single Kind of Hero (mazz)
at September 19th, 2013 (01:39 pm)


She's going to have her right arm clutching a book to her chest, she's eating a donut.
I already know she's suffering from no neck syndrome but feel free to line how her neck should be looking if you want.
She's supposed to be sorta chibi.
This is a SUPER ROUGH sketch obviously, I posted it to them to make sure they liked the pose idea but figured I'd get some critique on it since I gotta break from drawing to do homework.

This is the character if you need to see what it looks like.

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Pose Aid, please.
by + ♥ + (full_on_zombie)
at December 11th, 2010 (12:19 pm)

Hello everyone :)

I am by far finished with this piece, which is why I am asking for help now. Can anyone offer me some suggestions or reline on this guy's pose? He's supposed to be short and young, and I want his left foot to be up on the barrel while his hand is rested on his knee for support.

I also know his right leg position looks very off as well. Any help would be appreciated ♥

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I apologize for the x-post, too.

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Foreshortening Help, Please
by + ♥ + (full_on_zombie)
at October 3rd, 2010 (03:02 am)

Greetings all. I have this picture I need to get done by Tuesday, and I'm really fretting about the foreshortening issue, because it's a weak spot of mine. I'm kind of want it to be perfect, because this will end up being an 11 x 17 poster...so if something is wrong, it will easily be noticed.

I would appreciate any comment in regard to this:

If people could tell me what one looks correct, if any of them. I used reference, but I ended up messing it up....


x-posted, sorry.

Rana-saurus Rex [userpic]
by Rana-saurus Rex (braindeadrana)
at May 25th, 2009 (12:43 pm)

current mood: awake
current song: Mad World - Gary Jules

Hey all, I was hoping for some help with this dragon sketch I'm working on. :3

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Cael [userpic]
by Cael (cael_lilikoi)
at April 27th, 2009 (04:06 am)
current song: Enigma - 20.000 miles over the sea | Powered by Last.fm

I come bearing a request for some general critique!

I started/worked on this image way back in.. September or so. I've just now gotten back around to it and after a few hours of futzing around, am about ready to start tightening up the rendering and doing the final for srs details.

So, before I do that, I'd like to see about getting some feedback... I've saved it at fullsize so I can hopefully get the most accurate insight into it :) Note that the subjects are in greyscale on purpose, I just wanted to get the values right on them before I started getting confused with the weird dark lighting.

Linked here.

If you see anything at all off or that could be improved, please let me know!

Every Single Kind of Hero [userpic]
Critique/redlines please.
by Every Single Kind of Hero (mazz)
at January 28th, 2009 (09:09 pm)

current mood: aggravated

Someone please help me with this damn picture. I need to have it done soon and I can't get the pose right. Mostly, help with the arms is needed. I'm no good at drawing what is pretty much a feral on it's hind legs. Any help with the arms and the handpaw that's on the ground would be great.

I'll also take any other suggestions someone might have. I think I need to lengthen the torso some too.. My biggest problem is the arms though, I can't get them to look right no matter what I do.
Help. D:

Click image for full view

Crossposted like whoa, sorry if you see it a few times.

semisonicstar [userpic]
Redline pl0x? :P
by semisonicstar (semisonicstar)
at November 7th, 2008 (01:36 pm)

current mood: artistic
current song: Basement Jaxx - Broken Dreams | Powered by Last.fm

Hey guys, looking for some redlines/advice/anything really! I've already gotten this image redlined by a great friend (Sae!) but I want to see other people's thoughts too.

Below the cut are artistic nudies, though with barbie-doll bits... nothing graphic, but still may get a few raised eyebrows in a workplace X3

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EDIT: oh yeah, should clarify -- the purple lines are the ones I'm working with now. If it would help I can put up a version with /just/ the purple lines and no undersketch, wasn't sure what would work better.

space lion [userpic]
Sketch help!
by space lion (astrae)
at October 16th, 2008 (01:00 am)

current mood: confused
current song: Seira - Carry Me Away

Hello, first time poster :B! I am having issues with a sketch and I'd rather get the major issues sorted out before I start really detailing it.

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Thank you!

Cactus [userpic]
Gryphon WIP
by Cactus (celestialcactus)
at October 10th, 2008 (11:21 am)

Brand new member to this community!
And of course, I come bearing art:
Click me for the gryphon!

Link to the larger version on my journal.

It's still unfinished so any critics and redlines are welcome.
It's one of my very first attempt at a mostly realistic digital painting so I've got a lot to learn. :) (And sorry for the bad English. I'm a native French speaker.)

Every Single Kind of Hero [userpic]
Critique/readlines please. *VORE*
by Every Single Kind of Hero (mazz)
at September 17th, 2008 (09:39 pm)

current mood: artistic

I adopted someone on the vore exchange and I would love some help with my sketch so far.
Under a cut for size and vore; it's not hard.. actually not even adult in any way... no blood, guts, or current death.. just some teasing of prey.

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